Phân tích đề essay"New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật IELTS WRITING TASK 2 dạng Advantages & Disadvantages, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề essay về "new technology & children spend their free time" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

II. Từ vựng

        III. Phân tích

        IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

        • Dạng này thuộc dạng advantages outweigh the disadvantages IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn kĩ cách làm
        • Trong bài này nếu cũng xem như dạng opinion essay, là disadvantages hoàn toàn outweigh advantages thì sẽ chia thân bài như sau:
          • Body 1: lí do thứ 1 vì sao mình lại có ý kiến là disadvantages hoàn toàn outweigh advantages:
            • Main idea: Children might develop a passive lifestyle and possibly isolate themselves from society >> A sedentary lifestyle, as a consequence, is gradually developed
            • Supporting idea: This is because this way of entertainment is extremely addictive, and children therefore are likely to spend hours in their room without any communication with the outside world if  exposed frequently (Hoặc: As entertaining programs and apps are extremely attractive, children are more likely to be engrossed in those pastimes and spend less time on physical and outdoor activities)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Science IELTS
            • Example: 
          • Body 2: lí do thứ 2 vì sao mình lại có ý kiến là disadvantages hoàn toàn outweigh advantages
            • Main idea: violent scenes are rife on the internet >> Recent research has linked violent video games with the growth in the percentage of juvenile delinquency
            • Supporting idea: Children, who are incompetent of distinguishing the right and the wrong, may imitate anti-social behaviors and violate the laws is in all probability.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "RESEARCH" như Noun & Verb tiếng anh
            • Example: 

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